I'm really digging this game so far, but it is rife with spelling and grammar errors. You should probably hire a copyeditor. Hell, I would do it for free. Good game, but man do the mistakes stand out.
I agree, I want to go back and fix or edit some of the older scenes, altho the problem is that there are too many, if you tell me which ones are the worst offenders (share screenshots? or specificaly which one so I can find it) I can start working with those
The game is very good so far. I'v been so imersed that I didn't sleep at nigh haha. One of the thinks that's bohering me is the servants system. There should be an option to fire/kick out a servant/slave. I don't know if there is, but I don't know how to do it. Also, the whole happines think is not easy to read. I may just be an idiot, but I don't know how to raise hapinnes of some of them. But even with this, the game is awasome. Keep up with the good work.
when I was going over my captured people it would let me interact with them for the first option of punishment, rewards, etc, weirdly enough it let me choose all of the sexual options.
There seems to be a bug with what slot item names\quanities are placed into. The tool text for Club shows up when I mouseover the 'active' Empty slot, and clicking said 'active' Empty slot does withdraw the Club. The bug passes down from W to T; though for T the name\quanity might not appear at all, I hadn't paid attention to the thirs row when my warehouse was full, and I sold most of the items I wasn't using. I also only have one potion, so I don't know if this affects the consumable storage at all.
Is the futanari\shemale\newhalf succubus (Succubi is plural) supposed to be the 'nerdy' girl…? I mean, the first girl is stated to 'look sluttier' than Virgil, but I don't see what makes either girl nerdy… I mean, of Virgil is supposed to look nerdy, then I need more evidance than an generic book in their artwork. Unless the monicle they're wearing is actually a pair of glasses and isn't made clear enough. Honestly, Virgil's art looks far more posh and formal than nerdy in this version; but then again, I'm unfamilar with what nerds looked like back in the victorian or medival eras.
I didn't make a comment on this game which is suprising since this game is just so good.
I really like this game and the story which I hope keeps being awesome and growing.
this game is great with so many things but I don't like the complicated management system/stuff since it is just too much stuff to look at.
I thank you for making this much but if you can make a option to not fully control the management system this would be way better since some people don't want to do all this information sorting. I definitely don't so if you can make a option to reduce it that would be very appreciated. this good except that so keep doing good work. bye
I don't know what flags you have to hit with what characters but I know there is a check box in the options of the game and is by default turned off. So turning that on would be the first step. It is in Menu>tags>incest(check mark it)>then confirm it.
At least Vivi (the sucubo) is the MC cousin/sister, because when talking about magic she says ¨I don´t expect less from my blood¨ refering to the MC. I´m still a bit confused about this but Lucinda could be their aunt, or just nanny.
Momma's Surplus Tonic does not grow the size of your breasts. It instead decreases the size of your testicles. This prevents me using this item on Abbadon aswell . Screenshot here: https://imgur.com/a/a4Oj7ZK
Found this game yesterday and have been playing it for hours. Fantastic game. I can't wait for the final release!
The servant section seems very reminiscent of "strive for power" but seems a lot more complicated. As someone previously stated a help section or a tutorial for that section would be helpful. There also doesn't seem to be a way to sell a slave or release a free citizen from your staff.
I agree that a guide would be nice. As it stands, this game lacks player direction/guidance, but since it is in alpha/beta it's understandable. There are some instances of guidance in the flavor text(of what the NPC would prefer you do when given the choice) and at the end of the text(when it says "this option will change how this character acts from this point on") but otherwise if you do "location" events before "questlog" events you run into odd events where Abbadon/Alba will help you even if you have not met them yet.
Abbadon's pronouns dont behave properly outside of their Retainer options. Everything refers to them as "hisher." Also, their corruption level doesnt change from 100, even if the dialogue does.
I can't change the clothes on any of my retainers, despite Helena and Abbadon both being at full love, and Helena at 0 willpower.
Some suggestions:
Maybe add a "Help" option in each section of the journal, explaining what everything means. There is a servant with a "5" next to their happiness that I have no idea what it means.
Make it so you can disable traps in the tags.
Add a few females from species other than human to the forest. All I can find are traps and males
It might be asking too much, but maybe make changing someone's appearence actually have an effect. If I change my height to 10 feet tall, with a dick half that while fucking a girl that I shrunk to 3 ft tall, it'd be great to see some comments about that. Maybe after someone's size reaches a certain level, you get some alternative text for their scene? That would probably be really complicated to code, so it's understandable if that isn't going to happen.
Questions:
Does the wolf potion actually do anything? When I used it I got a message about getting fur, but then when I checked my profile it was the same as it was before.
beyond there being some flavour text telling you your dick is massive, or your size is huge, there doesn't seem to be any real reason to make your dick any bigger or smaller than the standard size - it feels completely pointless if there aren't consequences for such changes; like, people comment on how tall you are - or, if you've maxed your height, how giant you are, maybe throw in some 'giant-on-normal sized people' kind of things with hyper-cum inflation, like what you've got for that servant girl if you make her dominant - and people should definitely comment on your massive dick - i mean, this thing is as big as a literal human being and you're telling me no one even brings that up? r e a l l y ? I have a nutsack that dwarfs your head but you just dont give a shit?
also, changing the size of your nuts - is there a point to that beyond flavour text telling you that your nuts are as big as watermelons, or is there a genuine reason i'm just not clued in on?
oh, and could you please make it easier to be able to change your character into a beastly form? because i spent a solid ten hours grinding for those wolf potions and only found two in that ten hours - yes, i really did spend ten hours grinding to turn my character into a wolf, and you know what happened? i used the potion and...gained abs. yeah, gained abs. didn't even turn into a full creature, despite having 100 corruption. (side note: does turning into a different beast form change what your cock would look like? like, if i turned into a cat person with it have barbs, a wolf person a knot, a horse person a horse dick, etcetera?)
apart from that, i don't really see any issues with the game itself - there are spelling issues, and when i press one thing the button acts like i pressed the opposite choice, but that could easily be fixed i'm sure.
so yeah, this is a great game and i can see it becoming much better than it is already, given time.
The game's been absolutely fantastic so far, hope you'll continue this game until the end. I just wanted to share some bugs about baahla's purity and corruption route after ending scene and fluff scenes being swapped. This is also the case for Faustina's submissive and dominant button and story being swapped pretty sure.
Any chance of this coming out with an apk like C.O.C and T.I.T.S just asking as I love everything about this game but I can only play it on my tablet. keep up the good work
So far it's a really good game and I quiet like it, it reminds me a lot of some of my more favorite Html choice based rpg adventure games like TiTs (Trials in Tainted Space) CoC (Corruption of Champions) among others that I can't for some reason recall fully. And I really enjoy the idea of being able to Control your own kingdom and do what you desire with the citizens under your rule which really takes things a step further then what most really good written hentai games end up doing. That only really give you the bare minimum or just have you effect important npcs at best. But the one thing I really really would wish to happen is for someone to do a really long proof read and recheck of all of the choices in the game. Since I am about 460 days in and I have been noticing that a LOT if not every single piece of text has some kind of typo or incorrect information. Not to mention a lot of the choices also happen to be wrongly labeled which has players who don't save inbetween choices end up being stuck with a choice they thought they wanted only to later find out that you picked the wrong one. A big example of this is Lucretius's big choice of corrupting or purifying the city. You hit purify and you get the text result that tells you you chose corruption, you chose the corrupt option and you get the text result for purifying the city. Some don't even work like in The purple Succubus Devil girl (forgot her name) that you can basically name however you want's current end content where you choose what school you want to focus on. I spent a good 5-10 minutes debating what it was I wanted only to end up realizing that none of them mattered as I was only able to choose Destruction Magic to even continue the story all the other options don't do anything.
Again so far really good game but just requires a really good proof read and a look in the code, there was another instance that I don't recall were exactly but all of the times the game was going to mention either your character or the character you were taking to you just got the code that was suppost to help the game see what to call you like "If boy say He"
Wait, why does my game keep crashing? Like the furthest I've gone into the game is the title screen majority of the time it just crashes at the beginning
So I have the Futanari tag turned off, first of all, and a regular female character. In the second-to-last paragraph of the "Oral" scene with Baahla, there's a mention of both her pussy and "her erection", and in the second to last paragraph the "Vaginal" scene she "grabs her erection" and "sprays her load". I didn't give her any potions either.
I hope you don't mind, but I found something else. After Abaddon's beast transformation there's the short sex scene that immediately follows, it contains the "your cockhead" phrase and some others, but again my MC is fully female.
at the moment that affects mostly history characters. A bunch of the girls in the game are actually futa to begin with, but with this switch you don't get that content.
Since you can avoid enemies (either flee or dont surrender or get your way with them) this as less important, although in the future I will make that enemies won't spawn as futa either (probably for october's update)
Hey you mean to answer the questions or to go back to the first menu? Due to how some of the stuff works I think thats not as easy, although I may be able to tweak it (I'm gonna polish some stuff these days)
Just doing what the text said I went to the servant menu and click and option and the place holder text popped saying if you see this report it as a bug
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Can you play as a female protagonist ?
Yes
I'm really digging this game so far, but it is rife with spelling and grammar errors. You should probably hire a copyeditor. Hell, I would do it for free. Good game, but man do the mistakes stand out.
I agree, I want to go back and fix or edit some of the older scenes, altho the problem is that there are too many, if you tell me which ones are the worst offenders (share screenshots? or specificaly which one so I can find it) I can start working with those
Just a heads up for everyone here to check their Patreon for the public version of 3.5.
The game is very good so far.
I'v been so imersed that I didn't sleep at nigh haha.
One of the thinks that's bohering me is the servants system. There should be an option to fire/kick out a servant/slave. I don't know if there is, but I don't know how to do it.
Also, the whole happines think is not easy to read. I may just be an idiot, but I don't know how to raise hapinnes of some of them.
But even with this, the game is awasome. Keep up with the good work.
when I was going over my captured people it would let me interact with them for the first option of punishment, rewards, etc, weirdly enough it let me choose all of the sexual options.
There seems to be a bug with what slot item names\quanities are placed into. The tool text for Club shows up when I mouseover the 'active' Empty slot, and clicking said 'active' Empty slot does withdraw the Club.
The bug passes down from W to T; though for T the name\quanity might not appear at all, I hadn't paid attention to the thirs row when my warehouse was full, and I sold most of the items I wasn't using.
I also only have one potion, so I don't know if this affects the consumable storage at all.
Is the futanari\shemale\newhalf succubus (Succubi is plural) supposed to be the 'nerdy' girl…?
I mean, the first girl is stated to 'look sluttier' than Virgil, but I don't see what makes either girl nerdy…
I mean, of Virgil is supposed to look nerdy, then I need more evidance than an generic book in their artwork. Unless the monicle they're wearing is actually a pair of glasses and isn't made clear enough.
Honestly, Virgil's art looks far more posh and formal than nerdy in this version; but then again, I'm unfamilar with what nerds looked like back in the victorian or medival eras.
the UI looks a bit too shabby, maybe inprove that one day?
can make linux version?
I didn't make a comment on this game which is suprising since this game is just so good.
I really like this game and the story which I hope keeps being awesome and growing.
this game is great with so many things but I don't like the complicated management system/stuff since it is just too much stuff to look at.
I thank you for making this much but if you can make a option to not fully control the management system this would be way better since some people don't want to do all this information sorting. I definitely don't so if you can make a option to reduce it that would be very appreciated. this good except that so keep doing good work. bye
i'm new to this game, does anyone know how to access the incest content
I don't know what flags you have to hit with what characters but I know there is a check box in the options of the game and is by default turned off. So turning that on would be the first step. It is in Menu>tags>incest(check mark it)>then confirm it.
I got that far but i have no idea what characters would even qualify as relations in the game.
At least Vivi (the sucubo) is the MC cousin/sister, because when talking about magic she says ¨I don´t expect less from my blood¨ refering to the MC. I´m still a bit confused about this but Lucinda could be their aunt, or just nanny.
Momma's Surplus Tonic does not grow the size of your breasts. It instead decreases the size of your testicles. This prevents me using this item on Abbadon aswell . Screenshot here: https://imgur.com/a/a4Oj7ZK
Found this game yesterday and have been playing it for hours. Fantastic game. I can't wait for the final release!
The servant section seems very reminiscent of "strive for power" but seems a lot more complicated. As someone previously stated a help section or a tutorial for that section would be helpful. There also doesn't seem to be a way to sell a slave or release a free citizen from your staff.
I agree that a guide would be nice. As it stands, this game lacks player direction/guidance, but since it is in alpha/beta it's understandable. There are some instances of guidance in the flavor text(of what the NPC would prefer you do when given the choice) and at the end of the text(when it says "this option will change how this character acts from this point on") but otherwise if you do "location" events before "questlog" events you run into odd events where Abbadon/Alba will help you even if you have not met them yet.
I cant seem to open the application, Does anyone else seem to have this problem
is the game any closer to something connecting it to mac like unity?
I will try this month, but no promises
I remember time ago I attempted to, but the game did not work and since I dont have a mac, i could never test it or figure it out
Well I'm glad you tried at least, thank you for responding.
Great game! But I do have some problems with it.
Bugs:
Abbadon's pronouns dont behave properly outside of their Retainer options. Everything refers to them as "hisher." Also, their corruption level doesnt change from 100, even if the dialogue does.
I can't change the clothes on any of my retainers, despite Helena and Abbadon both being at full love, and Helena at 0 willpower.
Some suggestions:
Maybe add a "Help" option in each section of the journal, explaining what everything means. There is a servant with a "5" next to their happiness that I have no idea what it means.
Make it so you can disable traps in the tags.
Add a few females from species other than human to the forest. All I can find are traps and males
It might be asking too much, but maybe make changing someone's appearence actually have an effect. If I change my height to 10 feet tall, with a dick half that while fucking a girl that I shrunk to 3 ft tall, it'd be great to see some comments about that. Maybe after someone's size reaches a certain level, you get some alternative text for their scene? That would probably be really complicated to code, so it's understandable if that isn't going to happen.
Questions:
Does the wolf potion actually do anything? When I used it I got a message about getting fur, but then when I checked my profile it was the same as it was before.
beyond there being some flavour text telling you your dick is massive, or your size is huge, there doesn't seem to be any real reason to make your dick any bigger or smaller than the standard size - it feels completely pointless if there aren't consequences for such changes; like, people comment on how tall you are - or, if you've maxed your height, how giant you are, maybe throw in some 'giant-on-normal sized people' kind of things with hyper-cum inflation, like what you've got for that servant girl if you make her dominant - and people should definitely comment on your massive dick - i mean, this thing is as big as a literal human being and you're telling me no one even brings that up? r e a l l y ? I have a nutsack that dwarfs your head but you just dont give a shit?
also, changing the size of your nuts - is there a point to that beyond flavour text telling you that your nuts are as big as watermelons, or is there a genuine reason i'm just not clued in on?
oh, and could you please make it easier to be able to change your character into a beastly form? because i spent a solid ten hours grinding for those wolf potions and only found two in that ten hours - yes, i really did spend ten hours grinding to turn my character into a wolf, and you know what happened? i used the potion and...gained abs. yeah, gained abs. didn't even turn into a full creature, despite having 100 corruption. (side note: does turning into a different beast form change what your cock would look like? like, if i turned into a cat person with it have barbs, a wolf person a knot, a horse person a horse dick, etcetera?)
apart from that, i don't really see any issues with the game itself - there are spelling issues, and when i press one thing the button acts like i pressed the opposite choice, but that could easily be fixed i'm sure.
so yeah, this is a great game and i can see it becoming much better than it is already, given time.
hats off to you.
The game's been absolutely fantastic so far, hope you'll continue this game until the end. I just wanted to share some bugs about baahla's purity and corruption route after ending scene and fluff scenes being swapped. This is also the case for Faustina's submissive and dominant button and story being swapped pretty sure.
It hard to read some of the words.
Please fix some of the spelling mistake in future update, focus on the paragraph at the early game start with Heshe barely leaves the house.
when do updates come out
Would you guys ever consider porting this game to other platforms such as MacOS and Android?
im confused about the tags. Are they locked when marked or when unmarked?
Any chance of this coming out with an apk like C.O.C and T.I.T.S just asking as I love everything about this game but I can only play it on my tablet. keep up the good work
Where do you report bugs?
When is the next update?
So far it's a really good game and I quiet like it, it reminds me a lot of some of my more favorite Html choice based rpg adventure games
like TiTs (Trials in Tainted Space) CoC (Corruption of Champions) among others that I can't for some reason recall fully. And I really enjoy the idea of being able to Control your own kingdom and do what you desire with the citizens under your rule which really takes things a step further then what most really good written hentai games end up doing. That only really give you the bare minimum or just have you effect important npcs at best. But the one thing I really really would wish to happen is for someone to do a really long proof read and recheck of all of the choices in the game. Since I am about 460 days in and I have been noticing that a LOT if not every single piece of text has some kind of typo or incorrect information. Not to mention a lot of the choices also happen to be wrongly labeled which has players who don't save inbetween choices end up being stuck with a choice they thought they wanted only to later find out that you picked the wrong one. A big example of this is Lucretius's big choice of corrupting or purifying the city. You hit purify and you get the text result that tells you you chose corruption, you chose the corrupt option and you get the text result for purifying the city. Some don't even work like in The purple Succubus Devil girl (forgot her name) that you can basically name however you want's current end content where you choose what school you want to focus on. I spent a good 5-10 minutes debating what it was I wanted only to end up realizing that none of them mattered as I was only able to choose Destruction Magic to even continue the story all the other options don't do anything.
Again so far really good game but just requires a really good proof read and a look in the code, there was another instance that I don't recall were exactly but all of the times the game was going to mention either your character or the character you were taking to you just got the code that was suppost to help the game see what to call you like "If boy say He"
Is there a wiki to this game?
Not yet
Looking forward to it.
I liek
Wait, why does my game keep crashing? Like the furthest I've gone into the game is the title screen majority of the time it just crashes at the beginning
Is Bhalla a herm? Her sex scene is confusing and I dont know if it's because of the tags I've chosen or what
she can be, but is not an herm from the get go, maybe one scene has an error in the code, if you know which one it was i can look it up to fix it
So I have the Futanari tag turned off, first of all, and a regular female character. In the second-to-last paragraph of the "Oral" scene with Baahla, there's a mention of both her pussy and "her erection", and in the second to last paragraph the "Vaginal" scene she "grabs her erection" and "sprays her load". I didn't give her any potions either.
very well, those are definitely mistakes or bugs, i'll check them out!
I hope you don't mind, but I found something else. After Abaddon's beast transformation there's the short sex scene that immediately follows, it contains the "your cockhead" phrase and some others, but again my MC is fully female.
is there a way to get the sisterhood armour?
Think you can buy it at the blacksmith, after you are done with those quests
You need to be relatively pure to use it. (under 50 corruption i think)
I feel stupid to ask but how do you "purify" yourself to use the maiden's armor? I've not once been able to figure this one out
There are not many ways to purify yourself, there are some special potions that reduce it, will add more methods soon though
Where do you find these potions if you do not mind me asking
sorry for the delayed answer, in the alchemist and fighting enemies
Just to let you know the futa isn't getting disabled when turned off. Not sure if it is a bug or not fully implemented yet.
at the moment that affects mostly history characters. A bunch of the girls in the game are actually futa to begin with, but with this switch you don't get that content.
Since you can avoid enemies (either flee or dont surrender or get your way with them) this as less important, although in the future I will make that enemies won't spawn as futa either (probably for october's update)
might this ever be on mac?
I would need to check but I am assuming unity can export to mac
Cool, thank you!
Unity can export to Mac and it usually works without any extra effort (Mobile and Web builds are more likely to have problems in my experience).
You can also set up https://github.com/Chaser324/unity-build to let you deploy to all platforms on itch.io with 1 click.
so is unity able to support mac? Sorry if it feels like I am bugging you with this.
It'd be nice if there was a back button in the initial character creation scene so I wouldn't have to restart the game if I change my mind
Hey you mean to answer the questions or to go back to the first menu? Due to how some of the stuff works I think thats not as easy, although I may be able to tweak it (I'm gonna polish some stuff these days)
Just doing what the text said I went to the servant menu and click and option and the place holder text popped saying if you see this report it as a bug
do you remember which servant?
I think it was a slave I caught called Itzal Chay
oh i thought you were talking about a main character, slaves are procedural, gonna check that
Ah ok thought so wasn’t sure just know the thing said to say something
does anyone knows how to capture the enemies?
When you start the game you can't, you need to advance the story and after repairing the castle, you'll be able to
Thank you for your answer, I love your game....even I am not good at this game. XD